Tuesday, 18 November 2014

Film review

1 comment:

  1. Hey Ridge,

    I have just commented on your 'Repulsion' review, so have a look at that for advice about using quotes and referencing them correctly.

    What I would say here, is to always make sure that your quotes are working hard for you, that they support your discussion in some way. The quote you have used here about the sausages for example, is a bit random, as it is not being used to further your argument. You should always try and introduce the quote, and then unpick it afterwards, so for example,

    As john Smith points out in his review, 'blah blah blah.....' From this, it could be argued that.......